The next stage in writing an essay is to find a way of linking each of the factors together. Let's have a look at one of Becky's paragraphs.

Does she mention all the factors involved in the success of a health club?

You will notice that, at this stage, all the sentences relate to more than one factor.

These factors can be argued in a variety of ways. In Becky's case, there is a simple flow of factors, as you can see here.